Coira's coming off as quite a distinct character, which I enjoy. They are most likely all very distinct, but this is a relatively short piece. They really come to life.
Interesting beginning, with great tension in the situation the three characters are in and the feelings the narrator is going through.
Coira's coming off as quite a distinct character, which I enjoy. They are most likely all very distinct, but this is a relatively short piece. They really come to life.
Interesting beginning, with great tension in the situation the three characters are in and the feelings the narrator is going through.
Well done.
I'm liking the mix of danger and humor.
Quite an interesting and thrilling story so far! Can't wait to read more!
I am humbled. Thanks Michael.