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Michael Persin's avatar

"On nights with no moon, the stars shone on the water like a galaxy at your feet." That line is brilliant.

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Jeremy Harshman's avatar

Somehow didn’t see this one till I checked my email. You are too kind!

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Michael Persin's avatar

Can’t tell you how much stuff is buried in my mailbox lol.

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

I needed some help in getting from Chapter 1 to Chapter 2. They were locked inside a sealed space, and then here they're village inn. What did I miss?

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Jeremy Harshman's avatar

Aha! Ive confused someone. Faulkner would be proud. In part two, Lyfantod, introduced in part one, is narrating the scene at the inn. Hope that helps!

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